Thursday, June 2, 2011

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1There are many negative effects linking themselves to the drastic climate change, or Global Warming. These effects include the polar ice caps melting, economic consequences, increased probability and intensity of droughts and heat waves, warmer waters and more hurricanes, and finally, the wide spread of diseases. These are only some of the effects of the climate change, but they can be stopped. It will take time, but there is a number of different ways to stop the change. For instance, doing simple things such as picking up trash in your neighborhood, local park, school, or even just on the sidewalks will make a big difference. There is little doubt that the planet is warming. Over the last century, the planets temperature has risen by around 1 degree Fahrenheit (0.6 of a degree Celsius). The warmest since the mid 1800檚 was the 1990s. The hottest years recorded were 1997, 1998, 2001, 2002, 2003.

The United Nations panel on climate change projects that the global temperatures will rise 3-10 degrees Fahrenheit by the century檚 end - enough to have the polar caps all but melted. If the ice caps melt, a vast majority of our countries borders will be under water. Monuments and great buildings, as well as homes and lives will be under water, including New York City. Experts say that fears surrounding climate change are overblown

Alarming predictions that climate change will lead to the extinction of hundreds of species may be exaggerated, according to Oxford scientists. So now we know what some of the causes are for global warming, how can we as individuals do our part to help save the planet?



The answer is simpler than you may think. You don檛 have to go miles away from home to protest, or spend masses of money. Reduce, reuse and recycle. Only buy what you need; don檛 stock the cupboards with things you may or may not use. Reuse whatever you can, like containers and paper, and recycle what you cannot reuse. It really is as simple as that.

Finally turning off unused sources of power such as televisions and heaters will help the environment, as well as save you money. If everybody stuck to these rules, we would be doing a great thing by protecting the earth. So please take into consideration what I have said, and try to do your part. After all, it will be our next generation that will feel the effectsWill someone REVISE my Paragraph for me Pease?
There are many negative effects linking themselves to the drastic climate change, or Global Warming. These effects include the polar ice caps melting, economic consequences, increased probability and intensity of droughts and heat waves, warmer waters and more hurricanes, and finally, the wide spread diseases. These are only some of the effects of the climate change, but they can be stopped. It will take time, but there is a number of different ways to stop the change. For instance, doing simple things such as picking up trash in your neighborhood, local park, school, or even just on the sidewalks will make a big difference. There is little doubt that the planet is warming. Over the last century, the planets temperature has risen by around 1 degree Fahrenheit (0.6 of a degree Celsius). The warmest since the mid 1800檚 was the 1990s. The hottest years recorded were 1997, 1998, 2001, 2002, 2003.

The United Nations panel on climate change projects that the global temperatures will rise 3-10 degrees Fahrenheit by the century檚 end - enough to have the polar caps all but melted. If the ice caps melt, a vast majority of our countries borders will be under water. Monuments and great buildings, as well as homes and lives will be under water, including New York City. Experts say that fears surrounding climate change are overblown

Alarming predictions that climate change will lead to the extinction of hundreds of species may be exaggerated, according to Oxford scientists. So now we know what some of the causes are for global warming, how can we as individuals do our part to help save the planet?



The answer is simpler than you may think. You don檛 have to go miles away from home to protest, or spend masses of money. Reduce, reuse and recycle. Only buy what you need; don檛 stock the cupboards with things you may or may not use. Reuse whatever you can, like containers and paper, and recycle what you cannot reuse. It really is as simple as that.

Finally turning off unused sources of power such as televisions and heaters will help the environment, as well as save you money. If everybody stuck to these rules, we would be doing a great thing by protecting the earth. So please take into consideration what I have said, and try to do your part. After all, it will be our next generation that will feel the effects.
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